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The table give infortion about the transport use in Edmonton

The table give infortion about the transport use in Edmonton VPDRJ
The tables illustrate information about individuals ushing the car in City for several reasons. It is clear that the first table shows the proportion of car use. while, the second indicates the mode of transport used by individuals. Overall, it is clear that the highest number of people used car reason for the commute to work whereas, the car was the most popular transport mode used by the public. Having a myopic on the graph, it is crystal clear that the maximum number of people consumed car for the commute to work wich was 55%. while the second biggest use of car reason for Business by the public which was approximately under half percentage(45%). However, 40%of vehicles are used to taking children to school. in contrast, the percentage of shopping and leisure were showed similarity with the figure of 15% for both. Moving further, the second table depicts that, the car was the most common and highest amount of transportation which was used by individuals compared to the other three transportation modes. it was stood at 45%. while the LRT was the second majority with the proportion of 35%. interesting, Bus and Taxi standing the same level of percentage which were 15%, 15 respectively.
The tables illustrate information about individuals
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in City for several reasons. It is
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clear
that the
first
table
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shows
the proportion of
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car
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use
.
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while
, the second indicates the mode of transport
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used
by individuals.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the highest number of
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people
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used
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car
reason for the commute to work whereas, the
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car
was the most popular transport mode
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used
by the public.

Having a myopic on the graph, it is crystal
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clear
that the maximum number of
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people
consumed
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car
for the commute to work
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wich
was 55%.
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while
the second biggest
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use
of
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car
reason for Business by the public which was approximately under half percentage(45%).
However
, 40%of vehicles are
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used
to taking children to school.
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in
contrast, the percentage of shopping and leisure were
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showed
similarity with the figure of 15% for both.

Moving
further
, the second table depicts that, the
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car
was the most common and highest amount of transportation which was
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used
by individuals compared to the other three transportation modes.
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it
was stood
at 45%.
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while
the
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LRT
was the second majority with the proportion of 35%.
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interesting
, Bus and Taxi standing the same level of percentage which were 15%, 15
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The table give infortion about the transport use in Edmonton

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