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A lack of female leaders is a serious problem in Japan

A lack of female leaders is a serious problem in Japan J3DeD

I agree with the idea that disproportionately low woman in politics creates a serious problem. There are some reasons to cement my opinion. From my experience, everyone has a kind of biased, if not discrimination, thought based on each situation, leading us to pass a lopsided law, like supporting the budget related to geriatric society, with taking away feelings of the young. This problem has caused numerous obstacles which will have tormented youngsters, such as shortage of birth rates, the bond swelling up to the point where the government can’t pay Although people have noticed the incompetence of politicians, we have never changed it because of the system which protects a politician. That’s why we all younger people had better change the corrupted rule and the first step is reshaping the rates of male to female leaders.

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agree
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 that disproportionately
 low woman in politics creates a serious problem.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reasons to cement my opinion.

From my experience, everyone has a kind of biased, if not discrimination, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 based on each situation, leading us to pass a lopsided law, like supporting the budget related to geriatric society, with taking away feelings of the young. This problem has caused numerous obstacles which will have tormented youngsters, such as shortage of birth rates, the bond swelling up to the point where the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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pay


Although This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have noticed the incompetence of politicians, we have never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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because
 of the system which protects a politician. That’s why we all younger This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 had better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the corrupted This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 and the first
 step is reshaping the rates of male to female leaders. 