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The benefits of social securities

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According to a recent report from the Social Security trustees, the trust fund that pays for retirees’ benefits (OASDI, or Old Age and Survivors Insurance fund) will become depleted by 2033. This means that the fund will be exhausted and nothing will be left in its portfolio to help pay benefits. It does not mean, however, that all payments will cease: there will still be an ongoing payroll tax collection and income tax collection on benefits, but the trustees’ report estimates that this may cover around 76% of scheduled benefits. If it comes to that, recipients may then get their payments on a delayed schedule, or on time but not in full.
According to a recent report from the Social Security trustees, the trust fund that pays for retirees’
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Age and Survivors Insurance fund) will become depleted by 2033. This means that the fund will
be exhausted
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left
in its portfolio to
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benefits
. It does not mean,
however
, that all payments will cease: there will
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be an ongoing payroll tax collection and income tax collection on
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the trustees’ report estimates that this may cover around 76% of scheduled
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benefits
. If it
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to that, recipients may then
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IELTS academic The benefits of social securities

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