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If we look arround our socity, nowadays there are many places for people that have free entrance. And thats resonable because those were made by public tax money and still they are paying diffrent types of tax daily. reason is that public places often attract many residents to visit. One clear example is people always interested in the things that are free because it makes people who visit this place feel more comfortable and not thinking about the prices of the ticket entrance.

If we look arround our socity, nowadays there are many places for people that have free entrance. And thats resonable because those were made by public tax money and still they are paying diffrent types of tax daily. reason is that public places often attract many residents to visit. One clear example is people always interested in the things that are free because it makes people who visit this place feel more comfortable and not thinking about the prices of the ticket entrance. q1ONr
If we look arround our socity, nowadays there are many places for people that have free entrance. And thats resonable because those were made by public tax money and still they are paying diffrent types of tax daily. reason is that public places often attract many residents to visit. One clear example is people always interested in the things that are free because it makes people who visit this place feel more comfortable and not thinking about the prices of the ticket entrance.
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IELTS academic If we look arround our socity, nowadays there are many places for people that have free entrance. And thats resonable because those were made by public tax money and still they are paying diffrent types of tax daily. reason is that public places often attract many residents to visit. One clear example is people always interested in the things that are free because it makes people who visit this place feel more comfortable and not thinking about the prices of the ticket entrance.

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