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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The supplied tabular representation compares the quantity of various junk food eaten by Melbourne's citizens during the period of 2005 and present year along with the projections of 2025. Overall, it can be vividly seen from table that the proportion of famous type hamburger consumed in Melbourne will go up, whereas the amount of fried rice and noodles will drop. Moving into the details, in 2005 the ratio of hamburger eaten by people was highest with two fifth which is 38% now and it is predicted that the rate of eaten hamburger will reach to more than half in 2025. Moreover, the percentage of consumption of fried chicken in Melbourne followed by hamburger which is assumed that the ratio of this specific type of food will rise to 45% in 2025. Moving towards the rest of the details, the quantity of salad eaten in same city was lowest(5%) during 2005 which is increased in that time as compared previous years and it is anticipated that it's ratio will incline in 2025(41%) and become the third most popular food item. Lastly, the sum of fried rice and noodles consumed in Melbourne was same (a tiny fraction) which is expected that it's rate will jump in future with just under one ten.
The supplied tabular representation compares the quantity of various junk food
eaten
by Melbourne's citizens during the period of 2005 and present year along with the projections of 2025.

Overall
, it can be
vividly
seen
from table that the proportion of
famous
type hamburger consumed in Melbourne will go up, whereas the amount of fried rice and noodles will drop.

Moving into the
details
, in 2005 the ratio of hamburger
eaten
by
people
was highest with two fifth which is 38%
now and
it
is predicted
that the rate of
eaten
hamburger will reach to more than half in 2025.
Moreover
, the percentage of consumption of fried chicken in Melbourne followed by hamburger which
is assumed
that the ratio of this specific type of food will rise to 45% in 2025.

Moving towards the rest of the
details
, the quantity of salad
eaten
in same city was lowest(5%) during 2005 which
is increased
in that time as compared previous
years and
it
is anticipated
that it's ratio will incline in 2025(41%) and become the third most popular food item.
Lastly
, the sum of fried rice and noodles consumed in Melbourne was same (a tiny fraction) which is
expected
that it's rate will jump in future with
just
under one ten.
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

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6.0
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