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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The two maps show how a village called Ryemouth has been developed between 1995 to persent time. They have been many changes in this time period between 1995 and persent, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation. Overall the mostly changes are on the sea side vanishing the fishing port and abutting fish market and built there more residence apartments. Furthermore at the north east the creation of a golf course and tennis courts where farmland and a forest park were still found in 1995. A number of restaurants have been built on the opposite side of the road where was located shops. In addition, build more houses on the west side and the road surround this small housing development west of the main road has been extended further westward. The cafe remains, as does the hotel, in south esat, albeit with parking facilities which it did not have before.
The two maps
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how a village called
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Ryemouth
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been developed
between 1995 to
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persent
time. They have been
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many
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changes
in this time period between 1995 and
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persent
, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation.

Overall
the
mostly
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changes
are on the
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sea side
vanishing the fishing port and abutting fish market and built there more residence apartments.
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Furthermore
at the
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north east
the creation of a golf course and tennis courts where farmland and a forest park were
still
found in 1995. A number of restaurants have
been built
on the opposite side of the road where
was located
shops.
In addition
, build more
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houses
on the west side and the road surround this
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small
housing development west of the main road has
been extended
further
westward. The
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cafe
remains, as does the hotel, in south
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, albeit with parking facilities which it did not have
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before
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
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