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https://www.ieltsbuddy.com/images/ielts-bar-chart-southlands-exports-21897888.jpg Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2021 and future projection of 2025.

The graph examines data about the revenue generated, in billion pounds, by Southland's three primary export sectors (international tourism, dairy products and meat products) in the three years 2000, 2021 and 2025. Overall, it is clear from the graph that, at present, the highest revenue is generated by export of dairy products. Furthermore, while other sectors show some variation in the graph, meat remains the least productive sector throughout. In 2000, international tourism made the maximum revenue of around 8 billion pounds. Whereas, meat products export generated the least earnings of 6 billion pounds, though this remains the highest revenue generated by meat products throughout the graph. In addition, dairy products exports secured an earning close to 7 billion pounds. At present, in 2021, the graph sees an upward trend in the international tourism earnings with a marginal increase of 1 billion pound. It is estimated to further rise by around 1 billion pound in 2025 and is expected to give highest earnings then than any other sectors. Another interesting point is that, the export of dairy products have drastically increased since 2000 creating proceeds close to 10 billion pounds, which is forecasted to marginally drop by half a billion pound in 2025. Additionally, the exports of meat products experience a marginal decrease in the earnings by 0. 5 billion pounds in 2021 and further expected to hit s low point at 5 billion pounds in 2025 being the least revenue generating export sector amongst the three.
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in the three years 2000, 2021 and 2025.
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throughout. In 2000, international tourism made the maximum
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