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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. P0Y2
The consuption trends of different fast food in Melbourn shows at least no variation in the last fifteen years considering the five most popular ones. However, the prevision for the future shows an important rise in the consuption of just three out of five of the major fast food type consumed. Overall, between 2005 and now trends of consuption related to the most popular fast food type do not show strong changes in the habit of consuption, with the exeption of salad with a significant increased of ten units in the last fifteen years. Hamburger and fried chicken since 2005 seem preserved their popularity within the population of Melbourne, dominating over the other types of street-food. Instead, fried rice and noodles even if classify in the top five consumed fast food are quite impopular if compared with the formers. Of note, recently salad has gained popularity between the citizien of Melbourne with a strong increased in consumed units. In the future, salad will become a comparable fast-food choise as fried chicken, while the hamburger will remain as the most popular one.
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of salad with a significant increased of ten units in the last fifteen years.

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as fried chicken, while the hamburger will remain as the most popular one.
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

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4 paragraphs
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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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