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the graph above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

the graph above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. XNaO
The graph illustrates the percentage of population who owned a computer between 2002 and 2010. whereas the second graph shows computer or ownership percentage in relation to the different levels of education (diploma High School graduate college student college graduate and postgraduate) in 2002 and 2010. Overall, there was an increasing need for computer ownership over the years as the lowest percentage of population was found in 2002 while the highest in 2010. Moreover, computer ownership was greatly affected by the level of education giving the fact that postgraduate qualified people had the highest percentage of ownership compared to the diploma graduates who had the lowest in 2002 and 2010. in 2002 the percentage of population who owned a computer was marginally below 60%. In 2004 it has increased to become exactly 60% and afterwards it continued to increase considerably over the years to become slightly below 80% in 2010. looking to the relationship between the education level and computer ownership it was found that the lower education levels such as diploma and secondary school graduate doesn't just that are below 40% and 70% in 2002 and 2010 respectively. On the other hand, higher educational level namely college student’s bachelor and postgraduate qualification Had percentages that are above 50% and 80% in 2002 and 2010 respectively.
The graph illustrates the
percentage
of population who
owned
a computer between 2002 and 2010.
whereas
the second graph
shows
computer or
ownership
percentage
in relation to the
different
levels
of
education
(diploma High School
graduate
college student college
graduate
and postgraduate) in 2002 and 2010.

Overall
, there was an increasing need for computer
ownership
over the years as the lowest
percentage
of population
was found
in 2002 while the highest in 2010.
Moreover
, computer
ownership
was
greatly
affected
by the
level
of
education
giving the fact that postgraduate qualified
people
had the highest
percentage
of
ownership
compared to the diploma
graduates
who had the lowest in 2002 and 2010.

in
2002 the
percentage
of population who
owned
a computer was
marginally
below 60%. In
2004 it
has increased to become exactly 60% and afterwards it continued to increase
considerably
over the years to become
slightly
below 80% in 2010.

looking
to the relationship between the
education
level
and computer
ownership
it
was found
that the lower
education
levels
such as diploma and secondary school
graduate
doesn't
just
that are below 40% and 70% in 2002 and 2010
respectively
.
On the other hand
, higher educational
level
namely
college student’s bachelor and postgraduate qualification Had
percentages
that are above 50% and 80% in 2002 and 2010
respectively
.
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IELTS academic the graph above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

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