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The Pie Chart and table give information about the total value sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000

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The Table and Pie Charts illustrates about fish market in US in between the years 1988 and 2000 through importing. Overall the Piechart containing of three comparisions with respect to the years. A table is given above containing of the total value which representing in billions of dollars. We have a comparision between three years to analyse about the market in US. In 1988 Canada contributed the most of the amount to economy bearing 60 percent and china contributed the least amount to the economy having 13 percent and others are having 27%. In 1992 there is a decrease in the canada economy with 34% and there is an increase of 46 and 20 percentage in both china and other countries respectively. Having seen that canada and other countries decreasing their sales from 34 to 28 percent and 46 to 42 percent while china is performing well through increasing their market from 20 to 30 percent.
The Table and Pie Charts illustrates about fish market in US in between the years 1988 and 2000 through importing.

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containing of three
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comparisions
with respect to the years. A table is
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above containing of the total value which representing in billions of dollars.

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comparision
between three years to
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about the market in US. In 1988 Canada contributed the most of the amount to economy bearing 60
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percent
and china contributed the least amount to the economy having 13
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percent
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and others
are having 27%.

In 1992 there is a decrease in the
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canada
economy with 34% and there is an increase of 46 and 20 percentage in both china and other countries
respectively
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that
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canada
and other countries decreasing their sales from 34 to 28
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percent
and 46 to 42
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while china is performing well through increasing their market from 20 to 30
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percent
.
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