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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

This table shows the most fast food eaten by consumers in Melbourne bu units. First we have 2005-year list when Humburger was the best by forty units than Fried Chicken by 35 units and other Salad, Fried Rice and Noodles was about 5 in all of them. In our present, Humburger gets down but still about 40 units againist Fried Chicken that gets up by two and a bigger jump from 5 to 15 for Salad and at the end of table Fried Rice and Noodles by little hup to about ten in each one of them. In 2025 as we expect, we do not know if that true or not, we have a huge jump in Humburger to about fifty units and followed by Fried Chicken that goes to 45 units and the absolutely huge jump by salad from 15 to 41. That's a 26 point between the two numbers. In the end Fried Rice and Noodless still about 10 in every one of them. To sum up, we have a clear view that Humburger and Fried Chicken will continue in growing even they fell over sometimes and Fried Rice and Noodless will stay grow by little step in every time but biggest competator that expect to be the hero is Salad with it huge jumps.
This table
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shows
the most
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fast
food eaten by consumers in Melbourne
Make sure that ‘bu’ is an abbreviation (bureau, bushel). Did you mean “by”, “but”, “bug”, or “bus”?
bu
units.

First
we have 2005-year list when
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Humburger
was the best by forty
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units
than
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Fried
Chicken by 35
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units
and other
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Salad
,
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Fried
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Rice
and Noodles was about 5 in all of them.

In our present,
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Humburger
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gets
down
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but
still
about 40
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units
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againist
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Fried
Chicken that
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gets
up by two and a bigger
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jump
from 5 to 15 for
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Salad
and at the
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end
of table
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Fried
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Rice
and Noodles by
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little
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hup
to about ten in each one of them.

In 2025 as we
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expect
, we do not know if that true or not, we have a huge
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jump
in
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Humburger
to about fifty
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units
and followed by
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Fried
Chicken that goes to 45
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units
and the
absolutely
huge
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jump
by
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salad
from 15 to 41. That's a 26 point between the two numbers. In the
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end
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Fried
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Rice
and
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Noodless
still
about 10 in every one of them.

To sum up, we have a
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clear
view that
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Humburger
and
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Fried
Chicken will continue in growing even they fell over
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sometimes
and
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Fried
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Rice
and
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Noodless
will stay grow by
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little
step in every time
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but
biggest
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competator
that
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expect
to be the hero is
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Salad
with it huge
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jumps
.
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

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