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The pie chart below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school on 1981, 1991and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts reveal the variance of expenses for a specific school in the United Kingdom inthe years 1981, 1991 and 2001. According to all of the three charts, the major proportion of the funds were allocated to teachers' salaries on the concerned years. Considering the chart related ti 1981 in details, the institute spent a large amount of money on teachers' salaries by 40%, followe by other workers' salaries by 28%, whereas insurance cost the least in the mentioned year by 2%.

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IELTS academic The pie chart below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school on 1981, 1991and 2001.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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