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The diagram below shows the lifecycle of a frog. Summarise the information presented in the diagram.

The diagram illustrates about the lifecycle of a frog through their entire life period. Overall, there are different stages starting from the eggs to the fully mutured frog. totally there are 5 levels. Firstly, life of a frog is from the small spawn as they had a lots of it. After that it shows a growth to a early tadpole and head is developed, which is is small in size of three in numbers. Then the tadpole figure to show bigger in appearance and shape so that later it partially form as Froglet which can be also called as Metamorph. At this stage Metamorph develop the legs, eyes and hands. lastly the final level is the fully sized adult frog which built and it is capable to live the life then the cycle here after continues. this is how the life of a frog begins and finally getting their structure to a full frog.
The diagram illustrates about the lifecycle of a
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frog
through their entire
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life
period.
Overall
, there are
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different
stages starting from the eggs to the
fully
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mutured
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frog
.
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totally
there are 5 levels.

Firstly
,
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life
of a
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frog
is from the
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small
spawn as they had
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a lots
of it. After that it
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shows
a growth to
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a
early tadpole and head
is developed
, which
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is is
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small in size
of three in numbers. Then the tadpole figure to
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show
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bigger in appearance
and shape
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so
that later it
partially
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form
as
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Froglet
which can be
also
called as
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Metamorph
. At this stage
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Metamorph
develop the legs, eyes and hands.
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lastly
the final level is the
fully
sized adult
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frog
which
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built and
it is capable to
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live
the
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life
then the cycle here after continues.
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this
is how the
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life
of a
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frog
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begins
and
finally
getting their structure to a full
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the lifecycle of a frog.

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154 words
5.0
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