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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

These two bar charts show the amount of standard water supplied in Australia and Southeast Asia between the year1990 and 2010. Overall, the amount and quality of water supplied in Australia were higher than in Southeast Asia between the two time periods. To begin with, in 1990, almost 80% of people were provided water in Australia whereas in Southeast Asia it is reduced to one third in volume by 38%. In 2010, the supply of water to Australia was up to 98% and South East Asia got reduced by 20%. However, a change witnessed in Southeast Asia that the proportion of individuals receiving water is low in both the years compared to Australia. On the other hand, in the case of water purity, Australia in 1990 was again leading by distributing 70% freshwater to its inhabitants while the purity level in southeast Asia was just 40%. In 2010, Australia Improved its water quality to above 80% but in Southeast Asia, it dropped slightly to under 40%.
These two bar charts
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the amount of standard
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supplied in Australia and Southeast Asia between the year1990 and 2010.

Overall
, the amount and quality of
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water
supplied in Australia were higher than in Southeast Asia between the two time periods.

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begin
with, in 1990, almost 80% of
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people
were provided
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water
in Australia whereas in Southeast Asia it is
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reduced
to one third in volume by 38%. In 2010, the supply of
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water
to Australia was up to 98% and South East Asia
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got
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reduced
by 20%.
However
, a
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change
witnessed in Southeast Asia that the proportion of individuals receiving
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water
is low in both the years compared to Australia.

On the other hand
, in the case of
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water
purity, Australia in 1990 was again leading by distributing 70% freshwater to its inhabitants while the purity level in
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southeast Asia
was
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just
40%. In 2010, Australia
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Improved
its
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water
quality to above 80%
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but
in Southeast Asia, it dropped
slightly
to under 40%.
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IELTS academic The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world.

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4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
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