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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

It goes without saying that fast food is one of the most issues facing us today. In Melbourne the most types of food they eat is Hamburger. It is about 38 present and maybe it will rise and become 51. In the second place is Fried Chicken with 37 present and the pridics say that will rise in 2025 and become about 45. In the third place is salad in 2005 was about 5 but it maybe rise and become 41 in 2025
It goes without saying that
fast
food is one of the most issues facing us
today
. In Melbourne the most types of food they eat is Hamburger. It is about 38
present and
maybe it will rise and become 51. In the second place
is Fried
Chicken with 37 present and the
pridics
say that will rise in 2025 and become about 45. In the third place is salad in 2005 was about 5
but
it maybe
rise
and become 41 in 2025
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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