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The bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant.

The bar chart displays the most significant reasons for stress in different age groups in Canada. Overall, the age groups from 25 to 54 and from 55 to 64 mostly suffer from work excess and from the lack of money, while the most considerable causes of stress for age groups from 65 and over are their own health problems or no particular reasons. Looking into details, the percentage of the age group from 25 to 54 who suffer from their own health problems is less than 5%, while the percentage age group from 55 to 64 with the same reasons of stress is almost twice as high. The share of the age group from 25 to 54 who worked too much is the highest and reached approximately 30 %, while the age group from 55 to 64 with the same causes of stress almost halved to 15 %. And the figures for the age groups from 65 and over are the lowest and represented less than 5%.
The bar chart displays the most significant reasons for
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from 25 to 54 and from 55 to 64
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from 65 and over are their
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health problems or no particular reasons.

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, the percentage of the
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from 25 to 54 who suffer from their
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health problems is less than 5%, while the percentage
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age
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from 55 to 64 with the same reasons of
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is almost twice as high. The share of the
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age
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from 25 to 54 who worked too much is the highest and reached approximately 30 %, while the
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age
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from 55 to 64 with the same causes of
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almost halved to 15 %. And the figures for the
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from 65 and over are the lowest and represented less than 5%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada.

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