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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The given graph ilustrates how both and rainfall changes during the year in a city named Kolkata. illustrates Overall, it can be seen, that both climate change and rainfall fluctuate over the year. Besides, May is the hottest month of the year, whereas the highest rainfall is in July and August. January Feburary feburary During the first six months of the year, it is clear that the least temperature degree is 200 in, which is the lowest point Jan, . Similarly, the rainfall go up from --------- to --------. Moving to the last six month, the fall significantly to ---------, which is so similar to its starting point. In contrast, then this number increases sharply to reach a peck of 320 C in May, then it declines to less than 190 C at the end of the year, which is the lowest degree during 12 months. Moving to the rainfall, the change in rainfall shows a similar pattern to that of temperature. It rises from almost 5 in January to reach a high of around 330 mm in July. After this, this figure drops dramatically to about 2, which is the least in the whole year.

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 in a city named Kolkata.

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rainfall
 fluctuate over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. Besides
, May is the hottest month of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, whereas the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowermoisturerain
rainfall
 is in July and August.

January

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Feburary


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During the first
 six months of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
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, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the least temperature degree is 200 in, which is the lowest point JanDid you just mean “,” or “.”?,.
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Similarly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowermoisturerain
rainfall
 go up from --------- to --------.

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month
, the fall significantly
 to ---------, which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 similar to its starting point. In contrast
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then this number increases sharply
 to reach a peck of 320 C in May, then it declines to less than 190 C at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
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, which is the lowest degree during 12 months.

Moving to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowermoisturerain
rainfall
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
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rainfall
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 a similar pattern to that of temperature. It rises from almost 5 in January to reach a high of around 330 mm in July. After this, this figure drops dramatically
 to about 2, which is the least in the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. 