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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The given graph ilustrates how both and rainfall changes during the year in a city named Kolkata. illustrates Overall, it can be seen, that both climate change and rainfall fluctuate over the year. Besides, May is the hottest month of the year, whereas the highest rainfall is in July and August. January Feburary feburary During the first six months of the year, it is clear that the least temperature degree is 200 in, which is the lowest point Jan, . Similarly, the rainfall go up from --------- to --------. Moving to the last six month, the fall significantly to ---------, which is so similar to its starting point. In contrast, then this number increases sharply to reach a peck of 320 C in May, then it declines to less than 190 C at the end of the year, which is the lowest degree during 12 months. Moving to the rainfall, the change in rainfall shows a similar pattern to that of temperature. It rises from almost 5 in January to reach a high of around 330 mm in July. After this, this figure drops dramatically to about 2, which is the least in the whole year.
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ilustrates
how both and
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changes
during the
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year
in a city named Kolkata.

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illustrates


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, it can be
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seen
, that both climate
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change
and
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rainfall
fluctuate over the
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year
.
Besides
, May is the hottest month of the
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year
, whereas the highest
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rainfall
is in July and August.

January

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Feburary


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During the
first
six months of the
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year
, it is
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clear
that the least temperature degree is 200 in, which is the lowest point Jan
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, .
Similarly
, the
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go up from --------- to --------.

Moving to the last six
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month
, the fall
significantly
to ---------, which is
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similar to its starting point.
In contrast
,

then this number increases
sharply
to reach a peck of 320 C in May, then it declines to less than 190 C at the
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of the
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year
, which is the lowest degree during 12 months.

Moving to the
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rainfall
, the
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change
in
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shows
a similar pattern to that of temperature. It rises from almost 5 in January to reach a high of around 330 mm in July. After this, this figure drops
dramatically
to about 2, which is the least in the whole
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year
.
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IELTS academic The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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