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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

this photo below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. It is clear from the diagrams is it a conver wave energy machine to electric. According to what is shown, in the second photo high installation costs make large waves high output but, low installation costs make small waves low output. While, in the firts photo there is detiles of how conver wave energy machine to electric. the first step is to entire the wave in electricity generator. Then, the second step is move to the turbine. The result is electric and we need the air to make it work. It is a hard way to make electric. To sum up, we could use waves to make electric which is a smart way to make energy with less monay but, It is a complex way to make electric.
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this
photo below
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the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. It is
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clear
from the diagrams is it a
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conver
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wave
energy machine to electric.

According to what
is shown
, in the second photo high installation costs
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make
large
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waves
high output
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but
, low installation costs
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make
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small
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waves
low output.
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While
, in the
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firts
photo there is
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detiles
of how
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conver
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wave
energy machine to
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electric
.
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the
first
step is to entire the
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wave
in electricity generator. Then, the second step is
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move
to the turbine. The result is
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electric and
we need the air to
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make
it work. It is a
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hard
way to
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make
electric.

To sum up, we could
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use
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waves
to
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make
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electric
which is a smart way to
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make
energy with less
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monay
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but
, It is a complex way to
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make
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electric
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
141 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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