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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph illustrates total number tourists travelling a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017 Overall, visitors staying on the peak level is on cruise staying on island is marginally less from cruise ships though. In 2010, total numbers of travellers were only 1 million. After seven years, in 2017, it rose dramatically which is 3 million. However, between 2015 and 2016 it was on stable position which was approximately 2. 8 million On the flip side, people who were residing on cruise and island, people mostly prefer cruise though at 2010, it was just 0. 3 million while island was almost half million. In a matter of time, in 2017, It become clear as cruise is 2 million whereas island is only 1. 5 million chosen by residers.
The graph illustrates total number tourists travelling a specific Caribbean
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from 2010 to 2017

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In 2010, total numbers of
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, between 2015 and 2016 it was on stable position which was approximately 2. 8 million

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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

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