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The table depicts the statistic of pupils who signed up for online courses in four different subjects: Maths, Physics, Chemistry, and English.

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The table depicts the statistic of pupils who signed up for online courses in four different subjects: Maths, Physics, Chemistry, and English. Overall, the figure of students participating in English was the highest, while that figure for Chemistry is the lowest, they tended to increase with age, except for Physics. It could be seen that English was the most popular course in the group. The total of people who attended this class was 1350 with the highest figure found in grade 9 at 450. Meanwhile, the number of students in Physics was the same in all grades, with the number 150. With two subjects Maths and Chemistry, the total of students increased by age with the largest number in grade 9 with the figure of 300 and 200 respectively. The total number of students registered for Maths was 800, while for Chemistry were quite low just 300 students since in the first two years of secondary there were no students took part in Chemistry. The table depicts the statistic of pupils who signed up for online courses in four different subjects: Maths, Physics, Chemistry, and English. Overall, the figure of students participating in English was the highest, while that figure for Chemistry is the lowest, they tended to increase with age, except for Physics. It could be seen that English was the most popular course in the group. The total of people who attended this class was 1350 with the highest figure found in grade 9 at 450. Meanwhile, the number of students in Physics was the same in all grades, with the number 150. With two subjects Maths and Chemistry, the total of students increased by age with the largest number in grade 9 with the figure of 300 and 200 respectively. The total number of students registered for Maths was 800, while for Chemistry were quite low just 300 students since in the first two years of secondary there were no students took part in Chemistry.
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is the lowest, they tended to increase with
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