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Linegraph about our essay okay najim

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The given line graph compares the sales of three different types of books from 2002 to 2006. It is evident that the sale of educational books and children’s books showed an upward trend, but adult fiction lost popularity over the given time period. In 2002, adult fiction was on top with a sale of 45 million dollars, followed by children’s books at 33 million dollars and educational books at 25 million dollars. After a few fluctuations, the sale of adult fiction declined to 30 million dollars by 2006. In contrast, educational books were the least sold in 2002. After that their sale showed an opposing trend to that of adult fiction and reached $32 million by 2006. Sales of Children’s books’ started at $32 million in 2002, but rose rapidly to 42 million dollars in 2003. From 2003 to 2005 there was a very slight increase in sales, but after 2005, sales grew considerably and reached an all time high of $56 million. Overall, children’s books ruled the market after 2003, among the given three categories of books.
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line graph compares the
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sales
of three
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different
types of
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books
from 2002 to 2006.

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sale
of educational
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books
and children’s
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books
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showed
an upward

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trend
,
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but
adult
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fiction
lost popularity over the
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given
time period.

In 2002, adult
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fiction
was on top with a
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sale
of 45
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million
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dollars
, followed by children’s

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books
at 33
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million
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dollars
and educational
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books
at 25
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million
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dollars
. After a
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few


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fluctuations
, the
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sale
of adult
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fiction
declined to 30
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million
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dollars
by 2006.
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,

educational
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books
were the least sold in 2002.
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that their
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sale
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showed
an opposing
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trend


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to
that of adult
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fiction
and reached $32
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million
by
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2006. Sales
of Children’s
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books’
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started
at $32
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million
in 2002,
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rose
rapidly
to 42
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million
dollars

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in
2003. From 2003 to 2005 there was a
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very
slight increase in
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sales
,
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but
after 2005,
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sales
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grew


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considerably
and reached an
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all time
high of $56 million.

Overall
, children’s
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books
ruled the market after 2003, among the
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given
three categories of

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books
.

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Academic
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13 paragraphs
178 words
5.0
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