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production of electricity using geothermal power plant.

production of electricity using geothermal power plant. KGEr0
Although there are numerous methods in this modern world to generate electricity, one of them is by using a geothermal power plant. The diagram illustrates the mass production of electricity via a geothermal power plant where thermal energy is used to convert water to electricity. Electricity is produced with the help of several machines for instance- A generator, a Turbine, a Condenser, etc which uses water as the main source for the production of light. Firstly, the cold water is injected deep inside the ground into the zone of hot rocks where the channels are created to boil the water, thereafter the hot water is pumped up by using a condenser. At first, the condenser converts the hot water into the stream and later on, transfers the gas to a turbine that circulates the steam inside it, because the turbine is powered by the hot stream. After that the gas is transferred to the generator as it runs on the stream that is transmitted by the turbine, thereafter, the generator produces electricity on large scale. At last, the generator transfers the electricity to power stations. The overall process of electricity production is completed in 5 major steps by using the renewable energy of the earth.
Although there are numerous methods in this modern world to generate
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electricity
, one of them is by using a geothermal power plant. The diagram illustrates the mass production of
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electricity
via a geothermal power plant where thermal energy is
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used
to convert
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water
to electricity.

Electricity
is produced
with the
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help
of several machines
for instance
- A generator, a
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Turbine
, a Condenser, etc which
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uses
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water
as the main source for the production of light.
Firstly
, the
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cold
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water
is injected
deep inside the ground into the zone of hot rocks where the channels
are created
to boil the
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water
, thereafter the hot
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water
is pumped
up by using a condenser.

At
first
, the condenser converts the hot
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water
into the stream and later on, transfers the gas to a
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turbine
that circulates the steam inside it,
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because
the
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turbine
is powered
by the hot stream. After that the gas
is transferred
to the generator as it runs on the stream that
is transmitted
by the
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turbine
, thereafter, the generator produces
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electricity
on large scale. At last, the generator transfers the
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electricity
to power stations.

The
overall
process of
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electricity
production
is completed
in 5 major steps by using the renewable energy of the earth.
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