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The table depicts the household items used .

The table depicts the household items used. 66Eqj
In the span of 5 decades, possesion of television remain nearly 40% with the fluctuation of 6-10%; whereas stereo system was consumed maximum in 1980 by 75% households which was also the highest usage of any electronic equipment but by the end of 2010 its popularity dramatically plunged by 57%. The usage of microwave was mere 7% and interestingly it surged at a rate of 1% per decade tell 1990 but then suddenly got doubled and then jumped five times.
In the span of 5 decades,
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possesion
of television remain
nearly
40% with the fluctuation of 6-10%; whereas stereo system
was consumed
maximum in 1980 by 75% households which was
also
the highest usage of any electronic equipment
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end
of 2010 its popularity
dramatically
plunged by 57%.

The usage of microwave was mere 7% and
interestingly
it surged at a rate of 1% per decade
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1990
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suddenly
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doubled and then jumped five times.
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