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The bar chart below shows the value of nation export the earning goods and table chart show the percentage of change value .

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The bar chart illustrates the value of one nation's export earnings in different categories from 2015 to 2016. Meanwhile the table chart depicts the percentage change in values of each category to exports in 2016 compared with 2015. The bar chart data has calibrated in billions and table chart data has calibrated in the percentage. Overall, the highest value of billion in 2016 export by Petroleum product. However, the lowest value of income in earning in the 2015 by textiles industry. To begin with, In bar chart export earnings by different categories in two years 2015 and 2016. The Petroleum products earn a high profit during the year 2016 nearly 60$. In the next export item engineered goods, Gems and jewellery was constantly decline during the short period around 41 billions. Moreover, agricultural product and textile remain same export in the two years. Furthermore, the table chart shows that exporting the Petroleum product increase 3 % in year 2016. The next engineered goods is also increase 8. 5 percent. The besides Gems and jewellery is exporting earning rate is decline that was 0. 81 % and textiles that increase in the 2016 about 0. 18 and 15. 24 %.
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illustrates the
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of one nation's
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export
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earnings
in
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different
categories from 2015 to 2016.
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Meanwhile
the table
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depicts the percentage
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change
in values of each category to
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exports
in 2016 compared with 2015. The bar
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data has calibrated in billions and table
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data has calibrated in the percentage.
Overall
, the highest
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value
of billion in 2016
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export
by Petroleum
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product
.
However
, the lowest
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value
of income in
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earning
in the 2015 by
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textiles
industry. To
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with, In bar
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export
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earnings
by
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different
categories in two years 2015 and 2016. The Petroleum
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products
earn a high profit during the
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2016
nearly
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60$
. In the
next
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item engineered
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goods
, Gems and
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jewellery
was
constantly
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decline
during the short period around 41 billions.
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, agricultural
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product
and textile remain same
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export
in the two years.
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, the table
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shows
that exporting the Petroleum
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increase 3 % in
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year
2016. The
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engineered
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goods
is
also
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8. 5 percent. The
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Gems and
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jewellery
is exporting
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rate is decline that was 0. 81 % and textiles that increase in the 2016 about 0. 18 and 15. 24 %.
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