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Some countries have had implanting the idea of the ability of utilising dreams with hard work in younger generations.

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The flow diagram illustrates the method of collecting rainwater to be used as drinking water in an Australian city. We can see that water treatment requires six distinct steps and the only raw material is needed is the rain water. The process starts with water collection from the rooftops of all the houses. After raining water is gathered in pipes which is directed under houses, then water is filtered in a water filter box. Next, the filtered water move to the storage tank. At the fourth stage of water treatment, it is transferred into 'water treatment' tank, which is chemically treated followed by the passage of purified water in pipes till it reaches the consumer as an end product called 'Drinking water'.
The flow diagram illustrates the method of collecting rainwater to be
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as drinking
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in an Australian city.

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that
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treatment requires six distinct steps and the
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raw material
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is the rain
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. The process
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with
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collection from the rooftops of all the
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.

After raining
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water
is gathered
in pipes which
is directed
under
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houses
, then
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is filtered
in a
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filter box.
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, the filtered
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water
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move
to the storage tank.

At the fourth stage of
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treatment, it
is transferred
into 'water treatment' tank, which is
chemically
treated followed by the passage of purified
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in pipes till it reaches the consumer as an
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end
product called 'Drinking water'.
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IELTS academic Some countries have had implanting the idea of the ability of utilising dreams with hard work in younger generations.

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122 words
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