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The table depicts the gdp percentage of 5 counties on health

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The given table elucidates the proportion of GDP spend on public and private sectors of health in five countries, namely Japan, Italy, France, Germany and the USA Overall, what stands out from the table is that the USA spending of GDP on health is the highest among all the given five countries, while Japanese government spend the least percentage of total GDP on health. To commence with the USA, it spend 14. 3% of total GDP on health and from that 8% on public and 6. 3 % on private. Moreover, Japan and Italys' spending of GDP on health are the identical in percentage, on the public and private sector also. Additionally, France spend 9. 3 % of total GDP on health, from that 7% on public and 2. 3 % on private spending. Germany spend second highest percentage of GDP on health among given five countries which is 11. 4% and from that 8. 6% on public and 2. 8 % on private health.
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sectors of
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in five countries,
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is the highest among all the
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five countries, while Japanese
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the least percentage of total GDP on health.

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14. 3% of total GDP on
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health
and from that 8% on
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public
and 6. 3 % on
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private
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, Japan and
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Italys
' spending of GDP on
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health
are the identical in percentage, on the
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sector
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, France
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9. 3 % of total GDP on
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, from that 7% on
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public
and 2. 3 % on
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private
spending. Germany
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second highest percentage of GDP on
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among
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five countries which is 11. 4% and from that 8. 6% on
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and 2. 8 % on
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private
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health
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IELTS academic The table depicts the gdp percentage of 5 counties on health

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