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The given graphs give information about transport and car uses in Edmon.

The given graphs give information about transport and car uses in Edmon. LBG36
The assigned pie chart elucidates the information about various kind of vehicles, (car, taxi, Bus andLight rail transit) whereas tabular data depicts causes for use it in Edmonton city. To commence with, near about on half of individuals liked to car and 35%masses preferred to Light rail transit. It was surprisingly equap proportion of people favoured to Bus and Taxi accounted to on tenth in given period of time. On the other hand, table articulate 55%flok choose car for commute to work it was followed by business comprised to 45 %. 44%people used for taking children in school. The constant fraction registered to be shopping and leisure at 15%respectively. To cap it all, it is vividly manifested that maximum gens intersed for car due to various reasons which one powerful was commute to work throughout the given period of time.
The assigned pie chart elucidates the information about various kind of vehicles,
(car
, taxi, Bus
andLight
rail transit) whereas tabular data depicts causes for
use
it in Edmonton city. To commence with, near about on half of individuals liked to
car
and 35%masses preferred to Light rail transit. It was
surprisingly
equap
proportion of
people
favoured
to Bus and Taxi accounted to on tenth in
given
period of time.
On the other hand
, table articulate 55%flok choose
car
for commute to work it
was followed
by business comprised to 45 %. 44%
people
used
for taking children in school. The constant fraction registered to be shopping and leisure at 15%
respectively
. To cap it all, it is
vividly
manifested that maximum gens
intersed
for
car
due to various reasons which one powerful was commute to work throughout the
given
period of time.
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IELTS academic The given graphs give information about transport and car uses in Edmon.

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