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The diagram above gives us information about the manufacturing process of bricks used for the building industry.

The diagram above gives us information about the manufacturing process of bricks used for the building industry. mWLVK

From the diagram, it is noticeable that there are seven steps to manufacture bricks, started with clay-digging and ended up with the ready-to-use bricks delivery services. The process begins with collecting clay material from the source using a digger machine. Then the clay material filtered using a metal grid and crushed by the roller machine. In the next step, the crushed material mixed with sand and water so the texture changed. It can be easily shaped like a particular brick size by using a wire cutter machine or using a mould. In the fourth step, the bricks dried in the oven for 24-48 hours. Then the bricks burn on the kiln at a moderate temperature using 200C - 980C, followed by the same process with high temperature using 870-1300C, after that the bricks are left in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Once the bricks have been dried and ready, it packaged with a safe wood box. As soon as it is packaged, it is distributed to the building industry and delivered by truck or pick-up car.

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