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The maps above represent the changes of a university campus from 2010 until the present day.

The maps above represent the changes of a university campus from 2010 until the present day. wnK8m

Overall, the area of the university campus is not expanded, but some buildings are already reconstructed to be higher and converted to another function. Before the development, there were only two buildings for student accommodation. At the center of the campus, the student could enjoy the lake because it was surrounded by the lawn and seating area. Near the lake there were two building, it was shops and a restaurant. While the teaching block was built as one building near the university offices. It is noticeable from the maps that there are several significant changes over the period. A student accommodation building, the one located near the lake, was reconstructed as one integrated student facilities. So the offices, shops, and also the restaurant were placed on one building. Meanwhile, the new building for student accommodation was constructed beside the old building, and one other building was constructed at the former area of shops and the restaurant. Now the campus has no lawn and seating surround the lake. As the university offices moved to the new building, the old building was reconstructed to be higher and it used for science teaching. Whereas the art department still in the same place, but the building is higher than before.

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