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More and more people are stressed today than before What are the causes of this stress? Can you suggest some solution.

More and more people are stressed today than before What are the causes of this stress? Can you suggest some solution. 535Nn
In these days most of the individuals faced stress problems in comparison of past years causes and solutions related to this statement will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To start with, there are myriad causes for stress in the present world first and foremost is workload To explain, in the modern era all individuals are very busy in their life. The do number of works to earn more and more money and it will improve the living standard of a person. Due to this reason people increased their work load and they do not communicate with their family members. It is the one of the main cause of stress full life in these days. For example, the survey conducted by the medical colleges of America that 70% people face stress problems due to overworking. Moreover finical problems caused stressed problems in every person life. To clarify that, in the modern world money is most important thing as well as without it people cannot survive. Although India is developed country, yet India have an employment. Due to this reason number of educated people suffered for lack of money and it is the main cause of stressful life because they do not have money. These are the some causes of stressful life. On the other side, solution are not easy to solve the problems related to stress full life but people can do some steps to reduce it. First is education. To explain, if individuals have knowledge about the bad effects of stressful life. They will manage their working hours as well as person make their own time table and it is the one of main solution to tackle this problem. Furthermore, government provide job opportunity to poor people. If a person have source of income. They will improve the living standard of person and their families and individual are happy if they have enough money. This is the one of main solution to improve stress related problems. To conclude, overworking and try to earn more and more money create stress in life but manage time table and give job to poor people. It reduce the problems of stress in a person life.
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in the present world
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and foremost is workload To
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number of works to earn more and more
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and it will
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improve
the living standard of a
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person
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cannot survive. Although India is
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suffered for lack of
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and it is the
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time table and it is the one of
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provide job opportunity to poor
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and their families and
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related problems.

To conclude
, overworking and try to earn more and more
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money
create
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stress
in
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life
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manage time table and give job to poor
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IELTS academic More and more people are stressed today than before What are the causes of this stress? Can you suggest some solution.

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