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The table demonstrates clearly the development of 5 kinds of transport vehicles in Australia every two years from 2010 to 2014

The table demonstrates clearly the development of 5 kinds of transport vehicles in Australia every two years from 2010 to 2014 DY6Pk
The table demonstrates clearly the development of 5 kinds of transport vehicles in Australia every two years from 2010 to 2014. It is obvious that all given types of vehicles increased gradually over 4 years period and motorcycles is the most significant increase with 30. 8 percent. Beside, while passenger vehicles was registered is the highest figure, the lowest number of vehicles is light truck in 2010, 2012 and 2014. Among the five types of vehicles, Australian almost registered the passenger vehicles in 2010, at 11. 8 million vehicles, 2012 and 2014, at 12. 7 million and 13 million respectively, but it only moderately grew about 10. 2% from 2010 to 2014. Furthermore, the followed type of vehicles is commercial vehicles with 2. 3 million vehicles in 2010 and over 2. 5 million vehicle in 2012 and 2014. In commercial vehicles field, there was a considerable improvement during the given period with 17. 4% growth. On the other hand, the number of registered light trucks were the smallest figures at this table, at over 100 thousand vehicles in 3 timeline but it was used more year by year with the 23. 5% increase. Although the number of heavy trucks registered in Australia was about 4 times more than the number of heavy trucks in 2010, 2012 and 2014, this type had the smallest development with over 8% growth in 4 years period. Finally, the most significant increase compare with 4 other types of vehicles at 30. 8% was witnessed in motorcycles even though the number of this type of vehicles had the average position in the given table, from 0. 54 million to 0. 709 million between 2010 and 2014.
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clearly
the development of 5 kinds of transport
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vehicles
in Australia every two years from 2010 to 2014.

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vehicles
increased
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over
4 years period and motorcycles is the most significant increase with 30. 8 percent. Beside, while passenger
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vehicles
was
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registered
is the highest figure, the lowest
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number
of
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vehicles
is light
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truck
in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

Among the five
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of
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vehicles
, Australian almost
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registered
the passenger
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vehicles
in 2010, at 11. 8
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million
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vehicles
, 2012 and 2014, at 12. 7
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and 13
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respectively
,
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it
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moderately
grew about 10. 2% from 2010 to 2014.
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, the followed
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of
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is commercial
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with 2. 3
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in 2010 and
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2. 5
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in 2012 and 2014. In commercial
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field, there was a considerable improvement during the
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period with 17. 4% growth.

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light
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trucks
were the smallest figures at this table, at
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over
100 thousand
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vehicles
in 3
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with the 23. 5% increase. Although the
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of heavy
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trucks
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registered
in Australia was about 4 times more than the
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of heavy
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trucks
in 2010, 2012 and 2014, this
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type
had the smallest development with
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over
8% growth in 4 years period.
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, the most significant increase compare with 4 other
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of
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vehicles
at 30. 8%
was witnessed
in motorcycles
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had the average position in the
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table, from 0. 54
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to 0. 709
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million
between 2010 and 2014.
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IELTS academic The table demonstrates clearly the development of 5 kinds of transport vehicles in Australia every two years from 2010 to 2014

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