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The table compares tree types of a different branch of a company in terms of their transactions and on the most favorable food type.

The table compares tree types of a different branch of a company in terms of their transactions and on the most favorable food type. jD6qa
The table compares tree types of a different branch of a company in terms of their transactions and on the most favorable food type. Overall figures for 2 branches of Dunsmuir street and drake street were almost equal and higher than drake street. The Vancouver Georgia street has the most numbers of transaction (854) and transaction value (10. 69%) and in terms of other transactions is also ahead. The second largest transactions happen in Vancouver Dunsmuir street it is only 154 less than first branch and its transaction value is half of the numbers of the Georgia branch, with 750 number of transactions come to the second of list. Average Eat in and take away transactions in Georgia branch is 405 and 449 respectively which are closely similar to two other branches. the number of take away transaction in drake street is also the lowest 190 compared to 449 of Georgia and 392 of Dunsmuir street. It is evident that The Vancouver Dunsmuir street has best perform with 492 numbers while Vancouver drake street has only 190 number. the most popular item in Vancouver is transaction value with 9. 02$. the table also revealed eating habit of costumers in each area that is widely varied in Georgia street it is chicken burger, in Dunsmuir is chicken wings and in drake street is chicken pasta.
The table compares tree types of a
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and on the most favorable food type.
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were almost equal and higher than drake street.

The Vancouver Georgia
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value (10. 69%) and in terms of other
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in Georgia
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has best perform with 492
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while Vancouver drake
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it is chicken burger, in
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is chicken wings and in drake
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is chicken pasta.

IELTS academic The table compares tree types of a different branch of a company in terms of their transactions and on the most favorable food type.

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