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The line graph compares the number of cars owned by British people per household over a period of 37 years.

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The line graph compares the number of cars owned by British people per household over a period of 37 years. Overall, it is immediately apparent that the proportion of owners of at least two cars were expected to significantly increase during the research period. On the other hand, it is also noticeable that people tend to purchase more cars. There was a dramatic growth in the number of two cars ownership in Great Britain to more than 25% in the year 2007. The figure for three or more cars possessed by British citizens remained stable at 1%, 4%, and 5% respectively in the three time periods: 1971 to 1978, 1989 to 1996 and 1997 to 2004. Besides, this proportion peaked at 5% in 1997. Starting at 48% in 1971, the percentage of no car ownership experienced a sharp decline for most of the period, and then a nearly 25% decrease was recorded in 2007. Meanwhile, there was a gradual fluctuation in the number of individuals using only one car.
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per household over a
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of 37 years.

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cars
were
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increase during the research
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people
tend to
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purchase
more cars.

There was a dramatic growth in the number of two
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cars
ownership in Great Britain to more than 25% in the year 2007. The figure for three or more
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cars
possessed by British citizens remained stable at 1%, 4%, and 5%
respectively
in the three time
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periods
: 1971 to 1978, 1989 to 1996 and 1997 to 2004.
Besides
, this proportion peaked at 5% in 1997.

Starting at 48% in 1971, the percentage of no
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car
ownership experienced a sharp decline for most of the
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period
, and then a
nearly
25% decrease
was recorded
in 2007. Meanwhile, there was a gradual fluctuation in the number of individuals using
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only
one
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car
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IELTS academic The line graph compares the number of cars owned by British people per household over a period of 37 years.

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