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The line chart compares the number of cars per household in Great Britain between 1971 to 2007.

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The line chart compares the number of cars per household in Great Britain between 1971 to 2007. It is obvious, a general trend is an increase. Additionally, the percentage of households with two-car experienced the most significant change, by contrast, the proportion of no car ownership had a downward trend. First of all, the period of 36 years saw a considerable rise in the percentages of two cars ownership from 8% to 26% in 2007. The three or more car ownership held at the lowest position at 1%. There was a slight growth in the data of three or more cars ownership by 6%. In 1971, the number of households that did not owe a car was the highest percentage, at 47%. During the period, this object went into free-fall by 22%. Moreover, the proportion of households that owned one car dropped slightly from 44% to 42%, by 2%
The line chart compares the number of
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in Great Britain
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1971 and 2007".
between 1971 to 2007
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It is obvious, a general trend is an increase.
Additionally
, the percentage of
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households
with two-car experienced the most significant
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change
, by contrast, the proportion of no
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car
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ownership
had a downward trend.

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First of all
, the period of 36 years
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saw
a considerable rise in the percentages of two
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cars
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ownership
from 8% to 26% in 2007. The three or more
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car
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ownership
held at the lowest position at 1%. There was a slight growth in the data of three or more
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cars
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ownership
by 6%.

In 1971, the number of
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households
that did not owe a
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car
was the highest percentage, at 47%. During the period, this object went into free-fall by 22%.
Moreover
, the proportion of
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households
that
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owned
one
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car
dropped
slightly
from 44% to 42%, by 2%
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IELTS academic The line chart compares the number of cars per household in Great Britain between 1971 to 2007.

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4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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