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The table reflects satisfaction percents of the visitors of Ashdown Museum for a year before and after it's refurbishment. Overall, yearly visitor count have increased from 74 thousands to 92 thousands after refurbishment of the museum. Before the refurbishment of the museum, dissatisfied and very dissatisfied percent was the half of the total visitors. Satisfied percent had roughly the one third portion of the total. Very satisfied followed that with 15%. The visitors given no response was 5%. After the refurbishment of the museum, dissatisfied and very dissatisfied had reflected a significant fall to 20%, with 30% which is more than half of it's before value. Satisfied had shown a rise to 40% with one third of it's initial percentage. Very satisfied had a dramatic climb from 15% to 35%, which is even greater than it's first proportion. The visitors who given no response stayed at 5% and kept it's score.
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count have increased from 74 thousands to 92 thousands after
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dissatisfied percent was the half of the total
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percent had roughly the one third portion of the total.
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followed that with 15%. The
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no response was 5%.

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dissatisfied had reflected a significant fall to 20%, with 30% which is more than half of
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before
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had shown a rise to 40% with one third of
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initial percentage.
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had a dramatic climb from 15% to 35%, which is even greater than
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6.0
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