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The table compares the number of the income that came from the kiwi fruit exports from New Zealand to five various countries in three years (2010, 2011, and 2012).

The table compares the number of the income that came from the kiwi fruit exports from New Zealand to five various countries in three years (2010, 2011, and 2012). yLOpP
The table compares the number of the income that came from the kiwi fruit exports from New Zealand to five various countries in three years (2010, 2011, and 2012). Overall, Japan was the largest market during the period shown. The table shown the overall forward trend, while the proportion of Saudi Arabia had a significant decrease. In 2010, Japan played a great role with 271 million New Zealand dollars. The figure for China and Mexico were 74. 9 million and 1. 2 million, respectively. During the 2-year-period, Japan experienced a dramatic increase to 325. 3 million, whereas China and Mexico grew to 94 million and 3. 3 million, respectively. Turning to the remaining countries, Russia grew from 968. 000 in 2010 to 2. 4 million Zealand dollars. While Saudi Arabia dropped sharply from 29 million in 2010 to 82. 000 in 2014.
The table compares the number of the income that came from the kiwi fruit exports from New Zealand to five various countries in three years (2010, 2011, and 2012).

Overall
, Japan was the largest market during the period shown. The table shown the
overall
forward trend, while the proportion of Saudi Arabia had a significant decrease.

In 2010, Japan played a great role with 271
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New Zealand dollars. The figure for China and Mexico were 74. 9
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and 1. 2
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. During the 2-year-period, Japan experienced a dramatic increase to 325. 3
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million
, whereas China and Mexico grew to 94
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and 3. 3
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million
,
respectively
.

Turning to the remaining countries, Russia grew from 968. 000 in 2010 to 2. 4
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Zealand dollars.
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Saudi Arabia dropped
sharply
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in 2010 to 82. 000 in 2014.
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IELTS academic The table compares the number of the income that came from the kiwi fruit exports from New Zealand to five various countries in three years (2010, 2011, and 2012).

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