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describe your way to relax

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I am a fresh man and I have many problems with studying and exams so I often feel stressed and need to relax. One of my most favourite ways to relax is listening to music. After classes, I usually lie in my downy bed and turn on my favourite songs. I often listen to pop music and instrumental music. It heals my soul. I feel refreshed and comfortable with this activity. If I am at home, I do it whenever I work. I put my speaker on and play the songs. The music makes me feel energentic to work. It is the most effective way to chase stressful. I and my friends tend to create a youtube channel about music to help others who keen on music can easily listen to the lastest song or it will be a channel which help people relax after a hard-working day.
I am a fresh
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and I have
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problems with studying and exams
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feel
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stressed
and need to relax. One of my most
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ways to relax is listening to
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music
. After classes, I
usually
lie in my downy bed and turn on my
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favourite
songs. I
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listen to pop
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music
and instrumental
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music
. It heals my soul. I feel refreshed and comfortable with this activity. If I am at home, I do it whenever I work. I put my speaker on and play the songs. The
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music
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makes
me feel
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energentic
to work. It is the most effective way to chase stressful. I and my friends tend to create a
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youtube
channel about
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music
to
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help
others who keen on
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music
can
easily
listen to the
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lastest
song or it will be a channel which
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relax after a
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IELTS academic describe your way to relax

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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