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The given tabular chart represents the appropriation Of education rates by areas and by males And females number from year 2000 to year 2004 the data is calculated in percentage. From an overall perspective, it is apparent that country Europe Had the highest Total estimate percentage Of education rate While Country America and Oceania Had almost same Total estimated percentage Of educational rate Just a little variation was Seen in the percentage which was 93. 6% and 93. 4% respectively. Meticulously observing that Tabular graph It is seen that around 82. 2% of the world's Pollution was literate out of which 87. 2% where men and 77. 3% were women While countries America, Europe and Oceania Had the highest percentage of literacy rates whereas, Africa had totally 62. 5% of Educational rates from which 71. 6% were males and 53. 9% were females In America total figure of literacy rate was 93. 6% which consisted of 94. 1% of men and 93. 2% of women. Further, strengthening the same point It clear that country Asia had 79. 3% of Total educational rates out from which 85. 9% were men and 72. 5% were women while Country Europe Had the highest total literacy rate which was 98. 8% which considered of 99. 2% of males rate and 98. 5% of female rates. Whereas country Oceania had 93. 4% Of educational rates while 94. 2% are males and 92. 7% are female among total percentage.
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number from year 2000 to year 2004 the data
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overall
perspective, it is apparent that
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Europe Had the highest
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Of education
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While
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America and Oceania Had almost same
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variation was
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which was 93. 6% and 93. 4%
respectively
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Meticulously
observing that Tabular graph It is
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that around 82. 2% of the world's Pollution was literate out of which 87. 2% where
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and 77. 3% were women While
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America, Europe and Oceania Had the highest
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of literacy
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whereas, Africa had
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from which 71. 6% were
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In America
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figure of literacy
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was 93. 6% which consisted of 94. 1% of
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Asia had 79. 3% of
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out from which 85. 9% were
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Europe Had the highest
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literacy
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which was 98. 8% which considered of 99. 2% of
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and 98. 5% of
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. Whereas
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Oceania had 93. 4% Of
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while 94. 2% are
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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