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The diagram is a plan which depicts plans for the University's sports centre of the present and future: how it will look different in the future.

The diagram is a plan which depicts plans for the University's sports centre of the present and future: how it will look different in the future. oxErw
The diagram is a plan which depicts plans for the University's sports centre of the present and future: how it will look different in the future. Overall, it can be easily observed that both outdoor courts will be eliminated completely and the main centre sports building will be extended. In the new plans, both the outdoor courts will be removed from both sides which are west and east of the main sports centre; but the extension of the main centre sports building in place of the old courts from both west and east side, but not on north and south side. In this leisure pool on the north-west and sports hall on the north-east of the reception on the opposite side of the entrance. A new sports shop on the west and a cafe on the east will be created from the entrance of the building. And on the extreme right and left corner of the centre a new changing room will be built. Two dance studios should be the first-time build; on the near east and north-east of the sports hall.
The diagram is a plan which depicts plans for the University's
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sports
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centre
of the present and future: how it will look
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different
in the future.

Overall
, it can be
easily
observed that both outdoor courts will
be eliminated
completely and the main
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centre
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sports
building will
be extended
.

In the new plans, both the outdoor courts will
be removed
from both
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sides
which are west and east of the main
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sports
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centre
;
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but
the extension of the main
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centre
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sports
building in place of the
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old
courts from both west and east side,
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but
not on north and south side. In this leisure pool on the north-west and
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sports
hall on the north-east of the reception on the opposite side of the entrance.

A new
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sports
shop on the west and a
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cafe
on the east will
be created
from the entrance of the building. And on the extreme right and
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left
corner of the
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centre
a new changing room will
be built
. Two dance studios should be the
first
-time build; on the near east and north-east of the
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sports
hall.
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IELTS academic The diagram is a plan which depicts plans for the University's sports centre of the present and future: how it will look different in the future.

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