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School enrolment in the USA

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Introduce: The line graph gives the information about school enrolment in the USA between 1890 and 2001 Overview: -Over all, it’s clearly seen that students in grades 1-8 take the most enrolment in the USA -The line had a significant growth in 1890-1930 before having a fall down in 1930-1940. Subsequently, the student number increased dramatically to 33 in 1975 and fell down again. In the year after after 1990, the line climb to the highest value 36 Meanwhile, students in grades 9-12 and Colleges and Universities were the same in 1890. Both group nearly rise gradually and then are the same at 15 in 2001

Introduce: The line graph gives the information about school Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.enrollment
enrolment
 in the USA between 1890 and 2001

Overview:

-Over all, it’s clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that students in grades 1-8 take the most Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.enrollment
enrolment
 in the USA

-The line had a significant growth in 1890-1930 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 having a fall down in 1930-1940. Subsequently
, the student number increased dramatically
 to 33 in 1975 and fell down again. In the year Possible typo: you repeated a wordafter
after after
 1990, the line climb to the highest value 36

Meanwhile, students in grades 9-12 and Colleges and Universities were the same in 1890. Both group nearly
 rise gradually
 and then are the same at 15 in 2001