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the table chart shows the use of water in four different countries.

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The percentum of utilization of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada is listed in the given tabular chart. More specifically, the use of water is highest in domestic sector in Canada, accounting for 20 % and its half of is used in New Zealand. The corresponding figure for Egypt (8%) and Saudi Arabia (6%), orderly. In the industrial sector, 70% of water utilization is in Canada and almost a fifty percent of water is consumed in New Zealand. As many water is used In Saudi Arabia (30%) as Egypt (10%). In agriculture sector, the highest consumption of water is in Egypt. It is recorded to be 82%, whereas 64% water is utilized in Saudi Arabia. In addition, New Zealand uses water 44%, while Canada consumes 10. Wrapping up, it is clearly seen that the consumption of water in Canada is highest in two sectors except agriculture.
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is highest in domestic
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in Canada, accounting for 20 % and its half of is
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Zealand. The corresponding figure for Egypt (8%) and Saudi Arabia (6%), orderly.

In the industrial
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, 70% of
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utilization is in Canada and almost a fifty percent of
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is
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In Saudi Arabia (30%) as Egypt (10%).

In agriculture
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, the highest consumption of
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is in Egypt. It
is recorded
to be 82%, whereas 64%
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is utilized
in Saudi Arabia.
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Zealand
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44%, while Canada consumes 10.

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in Canada is highest in two
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