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Maps about bookshops in 2000 and now

Maps about bookshops in 2000 and now RR3VP
The two maps illustrate the developments that have been done on a bookshop between 2000 and the present day. The most significant changes, that have been done, are the rearrangements of the art, hobbies and cookery sections, and also, the opening of a new café as well as introducing tables in the middle of the bookshop. The fiction part, that was on the left area when entering the shop in 2000, has been rearranged by putting the art, cookery and hobbies sections next to it, while the fiction part, which was on the corner in 2000, has been replaced by the non-fiction section now. Thus, the fiction part has been reduced drastically in this period. The non-fiction books, which were on the right side with respect to the entrance in 2000, has been changed into a café. The positions of the new and travel books and the service desk have not been changed since 2000.
The two maps illustrate the developments that have
been done
on a bookshop between 2000 and the present day. The most significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
, that have
been done
, are the rearrangements of the art, hobbies and cookery sections, and
also
, the opening of a new café
as well
as introducing tables in the middle of the bookshop.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
fiction part, that was on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
area when entering the shop in 2000, has
been rearranged
by putting the art, cookery and hobbies sections
next
to it, while the fiction part, which was on the corner in 2000, has
been replaced
by the non-fiction section
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
Thus
, the fiction part has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
drastically
in this period. The non-fiction books, which were on the right side with respect to the entrance in 2000, has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
into a café. The positions of the new and travel books and the service desk have not been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
since 2000.

IELTS academic Maps about bookshops in 2000 and now

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6.0
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