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The map below show the development of a housing estate and its surrounding area sence 2000.

The map below show the development of a housing estate and its surrounding area sence 2000. VwVEJ
The given Three map depicts the information about development of housing estate and its rounding area in between 2000, 2010 and 2015 After Analysing, It is clearly seen that has been stable in the given time period. south side of private area was demolished divided into three parts the restaurant e-tailer add private area in 2010. Farm land area was smoller and housing estate take more place with constructed children play groundHowever, in 2015 family converted into parking and how sweet the state take more place with demolished a private area. well, children’s playground, retailer and restaurant had no changes in between 2010 and 2015 at last, by taking a general overview it is clear, there are many 12 had in farmland and its surrounding areas but Main Road stable with not any changes in during 2000 to 2015
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Three map depicts the information about development of housing estate and its rounding
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in between 2000, 2010 and 2015

After
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clearly
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that has been stable in the
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time period.
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south
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was demolished
divided into three parts the restaurant
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e-tailer
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add
private
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in 2010. Farm land
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was
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smoller
and housing estate take more place with constructed children play
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groundHowever
, in 2015 family converted into parking and how sweet the state take more place with demolished a private
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area
.
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well
, children’s playground, retailer and restaurant had no
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changes
in between 2010 and 2015

at last, by taking a general overview it is
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clear
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12 had in farmland and its surrounding
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areas
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Main Road stable with not any
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changes
in during 2000 to 2015

IELTS academic The map below show the development of a housing estate and its surrounding area sence 2000.

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