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The table chart shows the results of an airline survey in 2002 of economy class business travellers

The table chart shows the results of an airline survey in 2002 of economy class business travellers 6N8br
The table chart illustrates the information about the in flight feature of male or female commuters in two different age groups in the economic class, the survey is conducted in 2002. Overall, the total number of passengers were four hundred, hlf were women and half were man. In flight feature of the four categories mentioned, seat room was on the pinnacle but in flight entertainment was inferior for all. In the leg room, the old women were exact 35, whereas it rose by 11 passenger in male group. However, the remant category mentioned young female and men ranged between 30 and 39 respectively. The maximum number of females were involved in refreshments, while to minimum was male precisely 44. 64 female passenger had recorded in attendent service, similarly, 25 to 45 age group of males were involved just over one fifth. Movies in flight entertainment had lowest figure in both genders old male and females had same number that was four. In the young age group lay between the range 16 to 14 in 2002.
The table chart illustrates the information about the in
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feature of male or
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commuters in two
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in the economic
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, the survey
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were women and half were
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feature of the four categories mentioned, seat room was on the pinnacle
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in
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entertainment was inferior for all. In the leg room, the
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old
women were exact 35, whereas it rose by 11
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group
.
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, the
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category mentioned young
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female
and
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men
ranged between 30 and 39
respectively
. The maximum number of
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females
were involved
in refreshments, while to minimum was male
precisely
44. 64
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female
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passenger
had recorded in
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attendent
service,
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, 25 to 45 age
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of
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males
were involved
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over one fifth. Movies in
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entertainment had
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figure in both genders
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male and
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had same
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number
that was four. In the young age
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lay between the range 16 to 14 in 2002.
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IELTS academic The table chart shows the results of an airline survey in 2002 of economy class business travellers

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