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Result of Internal Quality Audit

Result of Internal Quality Audit mWNw8
Site engineer explained the responsibility of each staff according to the latest organization chart. QA section found that summarize number of staff did not conform with actual number then concerned staff should recheck and ensure the correctness of document before such document was issued. Admin. explained the process of Incoming/Outgoing Document include document circulation. All Incoming/Outgoing document will be recorded and registered to be the reference document. For document which has to notice the concerned staff will be circulated and staff should sign to keep as evidence of acknowledgement. QA section randomly checked the Incoming/Outgoing register and found that the hyperlink was not able to open cause that files which was linked by hyperlink are in personal computer drive. Then, QA section suggested admin to keep such document at the center server for able to access by all staff.
Site engineer
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explained
the responsibility of each
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staff
according to the latest organization chart. QA section found that summarize number of
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staff
did not conform with actual number then concerned
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staff
should recheck and ensure the correctness of
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document
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before
such
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document
was issued
. Admin.
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explained
the process of Incoming/Outgoing
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Document
include
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document
circulation. All Incoming/Outgoing
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document
will
be recorded
and registered to be the reference
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document
. For
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document
which
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has to
notice the concerned
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staff
will
be circulated
and
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staff
should
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sign
to
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keep
as evidence of
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acknowledgement
. QA section
randomly
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checked
the Incoming/Outgoing register and found that the hyperlink was not able to open cause that files which
was linked
by hyperlink are in personal computer drive. Then, QA section suggested admin to
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keep
such
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document
at the center server for able to access by all
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staff
.

IELTS academic Result of Internal Quality Audit

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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