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Bar Chart of Airport Visitors

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The bar chart gives information about how many people visited New York City through three major airports, over a six-year period between 1995 and 2000. Overall, it can be seen that over the period, there was a fluctuant trend in the number of passengers who travelled via John F. Kennedy airport, while the other two airports saw an upward trend. Another interesting point is that LaGuardia airport was the most popular at the end. Looking at the detail, the number of travellers at John F. Kennedy airport started at 26m in 1995, and then increased remarkably to reach the highest point of 47m in 1997. In 1999, the figure dipped to 32m. At the last year, there was a slight growth to 44m. On the other hand, LaGuardia began at 35m in 1995, after that it rose remarkably for the next three years, at 46m. In 2000, LaGuardia hit the peak point at 68m travellers. However, if we look at Newark airport, it started at the lowest point of 16m passengers in the first year. After this point, the trend increased significantly to 42m in 1998. In the last two years it remained stable at 42m travellers.
The bar chart gives information about how
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people
visited New York City through three major
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airports
, over a six-year period between 1995 and 2000.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that over the period, there was a
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fluctuant
trend in the number of passengers who travelled via John F. Kennedy
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airport
, while the other two
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saw
an upward trend. Another interesting
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point
is that LaGuardia
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airport
was the most popular at the
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end
.

Looking at the detail, the number of
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travellers
at John F. Kennedy
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airport
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started
at
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26m
in 1995, and then increased
remarkably
to reach the highest
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point
of
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47m
in 1997. In 1999, the figure dipped to
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32m
. At the last
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year
, there was a slight growth to
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44m
.
On the other hand
, LaGuardia began at
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35m
in 1995, after that it rose
remarkably
for the
next
three years, at
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46m
. In 2000, LaGuardia hit the peak
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point
at
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68m
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travellers
.

However
, if we look at Newark
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airport
, it
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started
at the lowest
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point
of
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16m
passengers in the
first
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. After this
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point
, the trend increased
significantly
to
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42m
in 1998. In the last two years it remained stable at
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42m
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travellers
.
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