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The table chart shows the data of online or department stores

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The table illustrates the data about the department stores and online stores of Australia during time period 2011According to provided table, counts of businesses of department stores was 67, while about 300 more stores of online stores can been seen compaditively. Apart from this, profit depicted opposite trend, profit of online stores had 56 %more than department stores. Moving ahead, the sales revenue of department stores and online stores were 12700, and13400 respectively. Whilst, growth of given department stores was4%; whereas, 2% less growth was depicted of online stores from department stores. Overall, it is clearly evident that online stores were much more popular in terms of number of businesses, profit, sales revenue, and growth rather than department stores.
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of Australia during time period 2011According to provided table, counts of businesses of
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department
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was 67, while about 300 more
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had 56
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. Moving ahead, the sales revenue of
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and
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were 12700, and13400
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was4%; whereas, 2% less growth
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were much more popular in terms of number of businesses, profit, sales revenue, and growth
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