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THE TABLE BELOW SHOWS THE PROPORTION OF PUPILS ATTENDING FOUR SECONDARY SCHOOL TYPES BETWEEN 2000 AND 2009.

THE TABLE BELOW SHOWS THE PROPORTION OF PUPILS ATTENDING FOUR SECONDARY SCHOOL TYPES BETWEEN 2000 AND 2009. 2KNQ6
THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF PUPILS ATTENDANCE IN 4 SECONDARY SCHOOL OVER A PERIOD OF 9 YEARS. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE TABLE THAT THE RATIO OF ATTENDANCE IN COMMUNITY SCHOOLS WAS THE HIGHEST AMONG OTHER SCHOOLS, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF ATTENDANCE IN SPECIALIST SCHOOLS WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 24% IN 2000 AND DECREASE TO 19% IN 2005, THE AVERAGE OF PUPILS ATTENDANCE IN GRAMMAR SCHOOLS DECLINE BY 12% IN 2009. ALTHOUGH 12% IN 2000 AND SLOWLY FALL TO 11% IN 2005, THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS ATTENDANCE IN SPECIALIST SCHOOLS SLIGHTLY DEPRESSED BY 10% IN 2009. MOREOVER, IN VOLUNTARY- CONTROLLED SCHOOLS THE VALUE OF PUPILS ATTENDANCE 52% IN 2000 AND NEXT YEAR THAT PERCENTAGE LOWERING TO 38% IN 2005. IN 2009, THE NUMERAL OF STUDENTS ATTENDANCE IN VOLUNTARY SCHOOLS IMMENSELY DECREASE BY 20%. HOWEVER, LAST SCHOOL WAS COMMUNITY SCHOOL. IN 2000, ONLY 12% PUPILS ATTENDANCE AND APPROXIMATELY RISE TO 32% IN 2005, THE QUANTITY OF STUDENTS ATTENDANCE IN COMMUNITY SCHOOLS EXTREMELY GROW BY 58% IN 2009.
THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF
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IN COMMUNITY
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WAS THE HIGHEST AMONG OTHER
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, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF
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IN SPECIALIST
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WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE
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ATTENDANCE
IN GRAMMAR
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SCHOOLS
DECLINE BY 12% IN 2009. ALTHOUGH 12% IN 2000 AND
SLOWLY
FALL TO 11% IN 2005, THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS
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ATTENDANCE
IN SPECIALIST
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SLIGHTLY
DEPRESSED BY 10% IN 2009.
MOREOVER
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THE VALUE OF
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52% IN 2000 AND
NEXT
YEAR THAT PERCENTAGE LOWERING TO 38% IN 2005. IN 2009, THE NUMERAL OF STUDENTS
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IMMENSELY
DECREASE BY 20%.
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EXTREMELY
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