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Chart shows result of a survey coffee and tea buying and drinking habits

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The histogram provides the information on the results of a conducted survey about people's purchasing coffee and tea as well as their drinking manners in Sydney Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobert over the last 4 weeks. Overall, it is evident that the percentage of city residents in Melbourne was the highest for going to a cafe for having a coffee or tea, whereas that of Brisbane stood at the lowest in purchasing fresh coffee. By giving a closer look, it is apparent that the percentage of going to a cafe in Sydney and Brisbane were merely over 60% and 55%, respectively. Conversely, Adelaide couldn't exceed 50% and Melbourne stood at approximately 64% which is ahead of Hobart (63%). Instant coffee was the most popular in Hobart, which is nearly 55% compared to the other four cities. Likewise, by looking at other remaining data about buying fresh coffee Brisbane and Adelaide had experienced the lowest (below 35%), while the percentage went above 40% in Sydney and Melbourne.
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in Sydney and Brisbane were
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was the most popular in Hobart, which is
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Brisbane and Adelaide had experienced the lowest (below 35%), while the percentage went above 40% in Sydney and Melbourne.
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