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The line graph and four pie charts illustrate economic increase and spending money on six household categories respectively, from 1995 to 2010.

The line graph and four pie charts illustrate economic increase and spending money on six household categories respectively, from 1995 to 2010. E3e1M

The line graph and four pie charts illustrate economic increase and spending money on six household categories respectively, from 1995 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen that 2005 experienced significant growth in economy, because people spent more money on clothing, entertainment and travel than others years. Moving to more detailed analysis, the rate of economic rise remained relatively stable during the time period. Despite of some fluctuations between 1995 and 2005 the index peaked at 4 at the end of first decade. The lowest point of economic level was -5, in 2008. On the other hand, the given timeframe saw hosing and food were the biggest parts of household expenditure. Those two fields took over half part of each given charts. Leisure activities such as travel, entertainment and clothing reached to approximately quarter part of all categories when economic level reached to the peak. Other spending categories remained unchanged over the fifteen years.

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economic
 rise remained relatively
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 level was -5, in 2008.

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 charts. Leisure activities such as travel, entertainment and clothing reached to approximately quarter part of all categories when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfiscalindustrialcommercialmonetarybudgetary
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 level reached to the peak. Other spending categories remained unchanged over the fifteen years. 